Post by Kira on Jul 10, 2009 8:45:21 GMT -5
its not the best name if any of you have a beter name just tell me.
also if anyone want's to do a grammer clean up on my work they can just pm it to me. Yes bill im talking to you.
This is the edited version. ;D
Chapter 1
Groaning, Crio opened one of his eyes but instead of the sleek steel of his transport ship he saw the dank walls of a stone room. Groaning again he rubbed his eyes feeling something soft against his hands. Crio moved his hands slowly away from his face. He stared wide eyed at them, they were covered with a crimson fur. Turning his hands over, he looked at his palms and saw that he had rough pads.
Breathing hard Crio got up off the bed he had been laying on. Feeling his body over and looking down he realized that he was nude. Crio finally calmed down and three questions came to his mind. Who am I? Where am I? What’s happened to me and where are my clothes!? Still breathing hard, Crio noticed a trunk and he tried to find a way to open it.
Exasperated he fell down on the bed and, suddenly exhausted, he slipped into a light sleep. Yawning, Crio rubbed his eyes looking around the room. It took him a minute to realize where he was and, sighing, he got up. Looking around the room once more, he noticed a monitor on the far wall. He walked up to the monitor and saw a flashing red light on a button. Crio pressed the button and the monitor screen flickered on showing a … GIANT TIGER!!
“Welcome to Slave penitentiary omega on the natural satellite circling the anthro home world. Your newly assigned species is anthro fox and your assigned name is Crio. Welcome to the fold Crio. You will be evaluated exactly one day after you watch this. Now enjoy yourself and meet the other fresh meat. The door will open automatically after you shut the trunk lid.” The screen flickered off and the red light stopped blinking. A clicking noise pulled his attention toward the trunk as the lid opened by itself.
As he walked over to the trunk an overhead light came on illuminating the contents of it. There were two pairs of clothes made of leather, dull beat up brown leather pants and shirts. Rummaging through the trunk, Crio spotted a weird necklace at the bottom of it. Grabbing it he saw one flat piece of metal with a rectangular like shape with rounded edges. He knew the shape but he just couldn’t put his finger on what it wa.
Shrugging he keep the necklace and grabbed a pair of jerkins. He quickly slipped them on and pushed his tail through a hole in the back of the pants. He took a deep breath, crouched down and shut the trunk lid. A grinding noise reverberated through the little room as the door opened. Standing Crio strode through the opening into a grimy dirty hallway.
Looking around he saw large arrows on the floor. Following the arrows Crio walked down a second hallway. He saw four other anthro’s walking around. There was a she wolf, a she fox, a he wolf, and a he lion. The she fox Crio noticed had aqua blue fur that ran delicately over a slim figure, a plush tail and the most beautiful golden brown eyes.
The lion responded to Crio “It is my business you don’t hit women it doesn’t matter who you are.”
“Are you going to back up your words tough guy” the lion reared back and threw a punch at Crio. Instinct kicked in and he dodged the punch, grabbing the lion’s wrist. With all his force he pushed the lion’s elbow inward. Following that action a loud crunch and a roar from the lion to show for his broken arm turning around
“I think we should all leave. My name is Crio by the way.” he said as he turned and walked away.
The little group started following the arrow’s.
“My name’s Aurora” the she fox said “she’s Icesis and he’s Bane. That guy back there, his name is Bruno.” She spate his name in disgust.
Looking back at them with a smile on his thin lips, Crio said, “I just couldn’t just stand by while Bruno was attacking Icesis. Now I don’t remember anything before I woke up this morning.”
“You mean you just got here today!?” all three asked in surprise. “With that kind of skill we thought you were a trained fighter.” Bane said immediately after their outburst.
Shrugging his shoulder’s he replied to them “I was doing only what came naturally to me… Look up ahead there’s a light at the end of the tunnel.”
“We are now approaching the main area where evaluations are carried out. Ours put us as a gladiatorial crew where we were paired with Bruno. But, as part of the gladiatorial crew we have to do anything and everything our gladiator asks of us.” Aurora said and Crio knew what had been going on when he had found them. “I’m so sorry then for that bastard” he replied to her.
“There’s no need to be sorry you stopped it before it happened.” She said to him with a playful smile on her lips. They walked into the main chamber there were anthro’s everywhere. Some in armor, some in uniforms, a major portion in leather pant’s or loin cloths and almost an equal number going about their business completely nude.
“What’s going on here Aurora?” He asked her looking around the place marveling at the size of it.
“This is the main area as I’ve said before. Now the evaluation area is over there.” she pointed toward the area with anthro’s in what looked to Crio like a doctor’s uniform “They evaluate your physical, mental and future potential. I think you might want to do that now. Over there is where your given your ‘profession’. We think after you’re performance against Bruno you should be guaranteed a place as a gladiator. They monitor everything so you may not even need to be evaluated.”
After she said that an attendant came up to them.
“Are you Crio?” he asked Crio nodded his head yes.
“Please follow me.” The attendant said to him. Looking back he saw that Bane and Icesis had started kissing and moving toward a doorway with a sign over top of it saying a night’s pleasure. Before he could ask a question Aurora answered him.
“They're mates. We’ve been awake for over a year now and about three or so months ago they became mates. Every once in a while the urge becomes to great for them to control, so they go off by themselves.” She winked at him and walked out in front of him following the attendant.
also if anyone want's to do a grammer clean up on my work they can just pm it to me. Yes bill im talking to you.
This is the edited version. ;D
Chapter 1
Groaning, Crio opened one of his eyes but instead of the sleek steel of his transport ship he saw the dank walls of a stone room. Groaning again he rubbed his eyes feeling something soft against his hands. Crio moved his hands slowly away from his face. He stared wide eyed at them, they were covered with a crimson fur. Turning his hands over, he looked at his palms and saw that he had rough pads.
Breathing hard Crio got up off the bed he had been laying on. Feeling his body over and looking down he realized that he was nude. Crio finally calmed down and three questions came to his mind. Who am I? Where am I? What’s happened to me and where are my clothes!? Still breathing hard, Crio noticed a trunk and he tried to find a way to open it.
Exasperated he fell down on the bed and, suddenly exhausted, he slipped into a light sleep. Yawning, Crio rubbed his eyes looking around the room. It took him a minute to realize where he was and, sighing, he got up. Looking around the room once more, he noticed a monitor on the far wall. He walked up to the monitor and saw a flashing red light on a button. Crio pressed the button and the monitor screen flickered on showing a … GIANT TIGER!!
“Welcome to Slave penitentiary omega on the natural satellite circling the anthro home world. Your newly assigned species is anthro fox and your assigned name is Crio. Welcome to the fold Crio. You will be evaluated exactly one day after you watch this. Now enjoy yourself and meet the other fresh meat. The door will open automatically after you shut the trunk lid.” The screen flickered off and the red light stopped blinking. A clicking noise pulled his attention toward the trunk as the lid opened by itself.
As he walked over to the trunk an overhead light came on illuminating the contents of it. There were two pairs of clothes made of leather, dull beat up brown leather pants and shirts. Rummaging through the trunk, Crio spotted a weird necklace at the bottom of it. Grabbing it he saw one flat piece of metal with a rectangular like shape with rounded edges. He knew the shape but he just couldn’t put his finger on what it wa.
Shrugging he keep the necklace and grabbed a pair of jerkins. He quickly slipped them on and pushed his tail through a hole in the back of the pants. He took a deep breath, crouched down and shut the trunk lid. A grinding noise reverberated through the little room as the door opened. Standing Crio strode through the opening into a grimy dirty hallway.
Looking around he saw large arrows on the floor. Following the arrows Crio walked down a second hallway. He saw four other anthro’s walking around. There was a she wolf, a she fox, a he wolf, and a he lion. The she fox Crio noticed had aqua blue fur that ran delicately over a slim figure, a plush tail and the most beautiful golden brown eyes.
The lion responded to Crio “It is my business you don’t hit women it doesn’t matter who you are.”
“Are you going to back up your words tough guy” the lion reared back and threw a punch at Crio. Instinct kicked in and he dodged the punch, grabbing the lion’s wrist. With all his force he pushed the lion’s elbow inward. Following that action a loud crunch and a roar from the lion to show for his broken arm turning around
“I think we should all leave. My name is Crio by the way.” he said as he turned and walked away.
The little group started following the arrow’s.
“My name’s Aurora” the she fox said “she’s Icesis and he’s Bane. That guy back there, his name is Bruno.” She spate his name in disgust.
Looking back at them with a smile on his thin lips, Crio said, “I just couldn’t just stand by while Bruno was attacking Icesis. Now I don’t remember anything before I woke up this morning.”
“You mean you just got here today!?” all three asked in surprise. “With that kind of skill we thought you were a trained fighter.” Bane said immediately after their outburst.
Shrugging his shoulder’s he replied to them “I was doing only what came naturally to me… Look up ahead there’s a light at the end of the tunnel.”
“We are now approaching the main area where evaluations are carried out. Ours put us as a gladiatorial crew where we were paired with Bruno. But, as part of the gladiatorial crew we have to do anything and everything our gladiator asks of us.” Aurora said and Crio knew what had been going on when he had found them. “I’m so sorry then for that bastard” he replied to her.
“There’s no need to be sorry you stopped it before it happened.” She said to him with a playful smile on her lips. They walked into the main chamber there were anthro’s everywhere. Some in armor, some in uniforms, a major portion in leather pant’s or loin cloths and almost an equal number going about their business completely nude.
“What’s going on here Aurora?” He asked her looking around the place marveling at the size of it.
“This is the main area as I’ve said before. Now the evaluation area is over there.” she pointed toward the area with anthro’s in what looked to Crio like a doctor’s uniform “They evaluate your physical, mental and future potential. I think you might want to do that now. Over there is where your given your ‘profession’. We think after you’re performance against Bruno you should be guaranteed a place as a gladiator. They monitor everything so you may not even need to be evaluated.”
After she said that an attendant came up to them.
“Are you Crio?” he asked Crio nodded his head yes.
“Please follow me.” The attendant said to him. Looking back he saw that Bane and Icesis had started kissing and moving toward a doorway with a sign over top of it saying a night’s pleasure. Before he could ask a question Aurora answered him.
“They're mates. We’ve been awake for over a year now and about three or so months ago they became mates. Every once in a while the urge becomes to great for them to control, so they go off by themselves.” She winked at him and walked out in front of him following the attendant.
